Malevolent Perfectionist

A short story prose that I came up with for an old rp I was apart of.

It'd be cool to hear some comments on it as I rarely write anything in this genre. My thanks in advance~

Summary:
The military gang are waiting patiently in a hospital room anticipating the arrival of Roy's and Riza's children. But as Riza goes through the pangs of labor, Roy is busy sweating out the doubts and insecurities of taking on the role of being a father. Can he really be the parental figure-head he needs to be?

This is in support of the Royai pairing.

All FMA characters and related articles are copyright of Hiromu Arakawa

http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101051907