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Diosa de Armarrio awesome poem. ^0^
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wow! BUMP!
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I read UC's poem and I posted another that was inspired by it.
smile Feel free to rate/review. It's called Lemonade. |
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Read Lemonade Syxx. Feel free to read MY LATEST POEM mrgreen
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rated your story Dark Lunar Night, good one click for my latest poem or I also have several stories in my stuff if you prefer stories.
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Alright. R&R'ing right now.
I posted a new one as well. It's called Hearts, feel free to check it out. |
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Hearts was a good one also Syxx. See my new storyTHE ENDING AGAIN Part VII Harm
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http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=101673411#titletitle
Go check it out! :3 Vote for me if you like it! It'll mean alot to me to get some good critisism for my poetry!! :3 |
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alright. I'll check them out!
Sorry for not posting in so long. I haven't had any inspiration lately ^^; Alright, here's my latest one. |
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Rated back Syxx. And have added a newer story segment
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R&Ring. I added two new entries - chapter one of my story The Aftermath, and a poem entitled The Soldier Ghost. Please R&R them if you have the time.
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Just heading over to read for the avi above me~
[EDIT: I went and read Bad Timing! I left a comment and rated of course] To the person below, please read which ever piece you want, but if you want a poem, I suggest this one, and for a story please look at this. It's my latest and I really want some feedback please! |
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Hmm the poem sounds like beat poetry.
For A moment i thought it was a pantoum and was overjoyed that some other than me knows what it was and can use it. But It's good, I'm trying to get a beat to it, but kinda failed. It's good, it gets a little inconsistent because you use two/three/four/an five words per line. Using that many if it is beat poetry throws off the beat. It is a good poem real good. Now for the story. Ehem. It sounds good. I'd like to read more of it and learn what an Asher is, who Dante and and Bailey are and what kind of magic you're talking about. ((Fantasy magic like elves or 'human' telekinetic and stuff)) I'd also like to know more about these Trackers, why they do what they do and who they are working for you know. I'd like to know more about Ellie and know more deeply how she feels about these things going on around her. Fear, anxiety, comfort, joy. Things like that. And how she feels about everyone in a group too. I'm going to wait for more I suppose. I have a story going on kinda like this, only the Trackers WILL kill people and torture others for information on the locations of their quarries. My trackers are kinda more like assassins. But this is a good start of a story, going right into action instead mucking about with back-story and things before this all changed. Very good. well, here are two of my poems both are old. I need to get newer ones up but well....meh. Web of Lies, When I was Young I wrote up a pantoum really quickly, its the most recent post of my journal. It's not a ballad, but well screw you. I can name it what I want. xp Ballad of the Fallen |
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