[ Poll ] Read, Rate, and Comment at least One Entry of the AAY

What's Your Favorite Genre?

Fantasy		36.0%	[ 63 ]
Sci-Fi		8.6%	[ 15 ]
Gothic		2.9%	[ 5 ]
Vampire		7.4%	[ 13 ]
Mystery		6.3%	[ 11 ]
Horror		11.4%	[ 20 ]
Romance		13.1%	[ 23 ]
Werewolf		4.0%	[ 7 ]
Action/Adventure		7.4%	[ 13 ]
Periodic		2.9%	[ 5 ]

Total Votes: 175

[UC Poika]

Miss Shirahime

Well, first of all, if this is going to be a long term thing would you please clean it up? I'm a bit OCD when it comes to that, and really, you don't have to bump. We'll notice you okay?

To Mr. Crazy,
I read your least rated one, one thing I would have to say I noticed was the fact that you see well there was just too much of that stuff called filler, maybe if you improved your syntax a little?

As much as you use too much filler, sometimes your voice isn't as interesting as you tell it to be, the sentence with "common robin" would've been transformed into a red-breasted robin shrilled a warning call to a nearby blackbird; this familiar saga performed since the birth of these two creatures... and so on and so on.

Differentiated Dialects Divides Dialogue. Maybe make the grandmothers voice different from everyone else?
Same thing with starry sky.

Ending also a little flat.

Don't mistake me, the more I comment on someone's piece the better it is. You did well!

I take it you don't like poetry either then, let alone the poetic style... Thanks for comment.

[UC Poika]

Archille

please coomnt my works under poetry and lyrics section. just search for my name there.

done view mine same way sorry about rating great rhymester

[Pumkinn]

take out some insurrence on your love! heart

[LotzD]

screw the rules i have money! xd

[UC Poika]

LotzD

screw the rules i have money! xd

ninja Where do I find more out about dragons? ninja

[jgirl39]

Rated 3nodding

[Pumkinn]

Did no one here read the first page? You read one written entry by the AAY, then comment on the story NOT on the forum (leave two if the comment it to long!) telling them what you thought and why you rated and then you rate them!

Got it?

[UC Poika]

jgirl39

Rated 3nodding

read and rated poems but how to comment on poetry I'm not sure. No criticism for your heart from me.

[LotzD]

Just_Fn_Crazy

LotzD

screw the rules i have money! xd

ninja Where do I find more out about dragons? ninja

lol, i actually wrote that as a gift to my bf who was rpging as a dragon with a similair past for a Fantasy rpg. Idk, if im going to write more.

[Lolita the Vampire]

I have one post! xd

[jgirl39]

Pumkinn, isn't that exactly what we've been doing?

[BiggieSmall123]

Miss Shirahime

Well, first of all, if this is going to be a long term thing would you please clean it up? I'm a bit OCD when it comes to that, and really, you don't have to bump. We'll notice you okay?

To Mr. Crazy,
I read your least rated one, one thing I would have to say I noticed was the fact that you see well there was just too much of that stuff called filler, maybe if you improved your syntax a little?

As much as you use too much filler, sometimes your voice isn't as interesting as you tell it to be, the sentence with "common robin" would've been transformed into a red-breasted robin shrilled a warning call to a nearby blackbird; this familiar saga performed since the birth of these two creatures... and so on and so on.

Differentiated Dialects Divides Dialogue. Maybe make the grandmothers voice different from everyone else?
Same thing with starry sky.

Ending also a little flat.

Don't mistake me, the more I comment on someone's piece the better it is. You did well!

Hm, i should go check out the story you just reviewed^
But Miss Shirahime, i love how you give details in your review. Could you read mine? I tried to PM you but you obv. had set it for friends only. neutral

[Pumkinn]

jgirl39

Pumkinn, isn't that exactly what we've been doing?

some people had been reading and then rating without commenting, which is rather rude, or they had been leaving comments on the story such as "see the forum for my review" and then leaving these long comments on the forum.

once again leaving more detailed reviews on the forum is fine but only to a certain point and rating without commenting is rude. if you have nothing to say or cant think of anything to say then just leave some generic comment as simple as "i liked it" or "i didnt like it".

[BiggieSmall123]

Hm 3nodding I would like to thank you guys for taking your time && reading/commenting/rating my story in the arena.