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Post: 65776823_16 created on Mon, 04 Oct 2010 23:04:35 +0000
Posted: Mon, 04 Oct 2010 23:04:35 +0000

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Post: 65776823_17 created on Mon, 04 Oct 2010 23:44:12 +0000
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Rated. Why did you send a trade?

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Post: 65776823_18 created on Mon, 04 Oct 2010 23:47:51 +0000
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Rated. Why did you send a trade?

Sending gold to people who rate =]

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Post: 65776823_19 created on Tue, 05 Oct 2010 04:08:14 +0000
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Post: 65776823_20 created on Tue, 05 Oct 2010 13:58:17 +0000
Posted: Tue, 05 Oct 2010 13:58:17 +0000

Hey, I've rated your work, please rate mine.
Heres another one I put up a few minutes ago;

http://www.gaiaonline.com/gaia/redirect.php?r=http://www.gaiaonline.com%2Farena%2Fwriting%2Fpoetry-and-lyrics%2Fvote%2F%3Fentry_id%3D102339413

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Post: 65776823_21 created on Tue, 05 Oct 2010 19:41:54 +0000
Posted: Tue, 05 Oct 2010 19:41:54 +0000

Sarah_2x

Hey, I've rated your work, please rate mine.
Heres another one I put up a few minutes ago;

]http://www.gaiaonline.com/gaia/redirect.php?r=http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=102339413

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Edit: I rated your other stuff too. ><

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Post: 65776823_22 created on Tue, 05 Oct 2010 19:53:38 +0000
Posted: Tue, 05 Oct 2010 19:53:38 +0000

Thanks, what did you think of the other two?
What did you rate them all if you don't mind me asking.

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Post: 65776823_23 created on Tue, 05 Oct 2010 20:13:08 +0000
Posted: Tue, 05 Oct 2010 20:13:08 +0000

Sarah_2x

Thanks, what did you think of the other two?
What did you rate them all if you don't mind me asking.

I don't remember exactly. But I really like your work. It is so meaningful. And all of it comes from real life situations.

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Post: 65776823_24 created on Tue, 05 Oct 2010 20:17:57 +0000
Posted: Tue, 05 Oct 2010 20:17:57 +0000

aw, thank you

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Post: 65776823_25 created on Sun, 10 Oct 2010 21:56:48 +0000
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Post: 65776823_26 created on Mon, 11 Oct 2010 06:36:31 +0000
Posted: Mon, 11 Oct 2010 06:36:31 +0000

I read a few of your poems, rated, and left comments. If you would like me to clarify anything further or bounce more stuff off of me let me know. I really do enjoy critiquing and trying to make things better. You've got a lot of potential. Let me know. Granted it is nearly 1 am so my grammar is probably horrible.

Anyway http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=102331801#title is my crap but don't feel obligated to read and rate. Even if you don't but you still like my critiques send me a message!

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Post: 65776823_27 created on Mon, 18 Oct 2010 18:51:02 +0000
Posted: Mon, 18 Oct 2010 18:51:02 +0000

you have some pretty good stofe i left comments hope you enjoy mine

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Post: 65776823_28 created on Sun, 07 Nov 2010 01:59:32 +0000
Posted: Sun, 07 Nov 2010 01:59:32 +0000

I was lazy so I didn't read them all...
sorry...

Typical Questions: 4.5/5
What makes this poem so special, is the artful use of the refrain.

Escape:
Very nice.
But though i loved the refrain in your other poem, I don't love it here...
For me, the poem ended with "Ah, Success."
I like that line because It's short, sweet, and simple.
4/5

Oh:
I LIKE IT!
I don't know why, I just DO!
Perhaps, it's the mostly consistent syllable count.
Or maybe the intense parallelism, or the repeating "Oh."
Or maybe, the rhyme scheme.
This is a great poem
5/5

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Post: 65776823_29 created on Sun, 07 Nov 2010 02:04:36 +0000
Posted: Sun, 07 Nov 2010 02:04:36 +0000

Zlhna

I rated Oh. I would have wrote you a comment on it, but it wouldn't let me do that. I liked the flow of it, but it didn't seem to always flow togather. I gave you a 3.

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Post: 65776823_30 created on Mon, 08 Nov 2010 19:40:37 +0000
Posted: Mon, 08 Nov 2010 19:40:37 +0000

Okay I'm going to do your please do mine. Especially look at Broken Mirror and Emotion Takes Her they are my newest ones.

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