I was lazy so I didn't read them all...
sorry...
Typical Questions: 4.5/5
What makes this poem so special, is the artful use of the refrain.
Escape:
Very nice.
But though i loved the refrain in your other poem, I don't love it here...
For me, the poem ended with "Ah, Success."
I like that line because It's short, sweet, and simple.
4/5
Oh:
I LIKE IT!
I don't know why, I just DO!
Perhaps, it's the mostly consistent syllable count.
Or maybe the intense parallelism, or the repeating "Oh."
Or maybe, the rhyme scheme.
This is a great poem
5/5
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