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Sending gold to people who rate =]
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Hey, I've rated your work, please rate mine.
Heres another one I put up a few minutes ago;

]http://www.gaiaonline.com/gaia/redirect.php?r=http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=102339413


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Edit: I rated your other stuff too. ><
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Thanks, what did you think of the other two?
What did you rate them all if you don't mind me asking.
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Thanks, what did you think of the other two?
What did you rate them all if you don't mind me asking.


I don't remember exactly. But I really like your work. It is so meaningful. And all of it comes from real life situations.
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aw, thank you
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I read a few of your poems, rated, and left comments. If you would like me to clarify anything further or bounce more stuff off of me let me know. I really do enjoy critiquing and trying to make things better. You've got a lot of potential. Let me know. Granted it is nearly 1 am so my grammar is probably horrible.

Anyway http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=102331801#title is my crap but don't feel obligated to read and rate. Even if you don't but you still like my critiques send me a message!

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you have some pretty good stofe i left comments hope you enjoy mine
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I was lazy so I didn't read them all...
sorry...

Typical Questions: 4.5/5
What makes this poem so special, is the artful use of the refrain.

Escape:
Very nice.
But though i loved the refrain in your other poem, I don't love it here...
For me, the poem ended with "Ah, Success."
I like that line because It's short, sweet, and simple.
4/5

Oh:
I LIKE IT!
I don't know why, I just DO!
Perhaps, it's the mostly consistent syllable count.
Or maybe the intense parallelism, or the repeating "Oh."
Or maybe, the rhyme scheme.
This is a great poem
5/5

rate back?
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I rated Oh. I would have wrote you a comment on it, but it wouldn't let me do that. I liked the flow of it, but it didn't seem to always flow togather. I gave you a 3.


uh.... what?
Okay I'm going to do your please do mine. Especially look at Broken Mirror and Emotion Takes Her they are my newest ones.

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