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Yeah, I did this story about a year ago. It's about a boy standing out in a sea of insane high-school kids unfazed by a sudden outbreak of zombie invasion, while using his extensive horror-movie knowledge to combat the undead into submission. I got a laugh out loud from my English teacher, but I sure don't think that was really satisfying as actual critique.

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horror movie knowlege? that is kind of childish and naive if you ask me that is my honest opinion
 
     
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Well, childish? I don't know where you're coming from with that one. I'll admit the naivety. What would be the best paragraph to unnecessarily hype this thing up be, I'm asking? When it boils down the actual content of it, I'm not going to proclaim something along the lines of, "Brandishing his pump-action shotgun with an endless supply of shells, he targets the witches preying on his family, intent on revenge." But I used the sentence in a similar vein.
     
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