Please don't bump unless your topic falls off the first page. This is an extremely (and I mean EXTREMELY) slow forum. Trust me, your topic is gonna be up here for at least a month before you have to even think about bumping.
With that said, we don't get much traffic in here and as I have no experience with critiquing poetry, may I suggest trying to post it in the poetry sub-forum? You'll probably have better luck there. ^.^