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Please read my story. :3

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Post: 54023555_16 created on Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:28 pmPosted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:28 pm


	... biggrin

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Post: 54023555_17 created on Thu Sep 17, 2009 11:48 amPosted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 11:48 am

~o~Da Loopster is saying something so listen up!! ~o~

>>. I liked your story very much,but the one thing that bothered was me was the lack of explanation like as to how the boy "really" died,but anyway Tis all good.. .<<

~o~ Did you listen??..She wont repeat it !! ~o~

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Post: 54023555_18 created on Thu Sep 17, 2009 3:56 pmPosted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 3:56 pm


	powerful emotions, though i agree with one of the comments about forced dialogue. but it's really sweet and sad smile i rated 5 stars,btw. great job!

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Post: 54023555_19 created on Sat Oct 31, 2009 9:20 pmPosted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 9:20 pm


	ill vote on ur writing i hope its good pirate

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