Please read my story. :3

[Revo_099]

... biggrin

[Lewpy Von Cakes]

~o~Da Loopster is saying something so listen up!! ~o~

>>. I liked your story very much,but the one thing that bothered was me was the lack of explanation like as to how the boy "really" died,but anyway Tis all good.. .<<

~o~ Did you listen??..She wont repeat it !! ~o~

[kayjenno]

powerful emotions, though i agree with one of the comments about forced dialogue. but it's really sweet and sad smile i rated 5 stars,btw. great job!

[Emo_Bunny_657]

ill vote on ur writing i hope its good pirate