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If you have a few spare minute, please follow this link, http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=100026483
read the story once and maybe once more if it doesn't make sense. Then, I would really appreciate any feedback you have. You can post it here, there, or pm me. Thanks
That was very good


I don't think I have any constructive criticism for this piece of work.
I really enjoyed reading it, and hope to read more of your compositions in the future. ^_^
I will be looking over it sometime again when I am not so tired. Until then.

-Kim

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