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[spandexmuffin]

I have written a comparative study of the significance of one's name in the novels, like water for chocolate and this earth of mankind. It is an assignment I have written for school and any constructive criticism would be much appreciated.
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http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/non-fiction/vote/?entry_id=102618573#title

[Mizuki777x]

I think that the story sounds great! I would so want that if it was a real book, also I would want to know more about the water for chocolate! It sound yummy!

[spandexmuffin]

Both of which are real books. This Earth of Mankind by Pramoedya Anata Toer and Like for Chocolate by Laura Esuivel. And by the way, "Like water for chocolate" is an extended metaphore that is in many ways the focal point of the entire book. But regardless, I am still sure that you would find it appetizing. hehehe