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i really need some attention on this piece i posted, i'm really excited to see what people think of it, but i'm not sure if anyone participates in this arena so i will link it, you don't have to rate but please read and comment ! yum_salmon

http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=102661957
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i really need some attention on this piece i posted, i'm really excited to see what people think of it, but i'm not sure if anyone participates in this arena so i will link it, you don't have to rate but please read and comment ! yum_salmon

]http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=102661957

When you're uploading something to Gaia, indents and tabs don't work. You're just supposed to put a space between paragraphs. It just makes it easier on those of us who don't have good eyesight.

Anyway, it's a little on the short side, and some of the description feels kinda awkward. All in all, it's not bad, and I'd say you should continue this story.
wow that's really good biggrin

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