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its a short story about a haunted house, nothing new there, but i would like it if people could tell me what they thought of it. my grammer and spelling are really bad, but i checked it many times over. so here it is, and dont worry about making me upset. i want your thoughts

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I commented on it; would you be willing to critique mine as well?

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