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Post: 42756781_1 created on Tue, 12 Aug 2008 19:08:54 +0000
Posted: Tue, 12 Aug 2008 19:08:54 +0000

its a short story about a haunted house, nothing new there, but i would like it if people could tell me what they thought of it. my grammer and spelling are really bad, but i checked it many times over. so here it is, and dont worry about making me upset. i want your thoughts

http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=100012419

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Post: 42756781_2 created on Wed, 13 Aug 2008 01:59:03 +0000
Posted: Wed, 13 Aug 2008 01:59:03 +0000

I commented on it; would you be willing to critique mine as well?
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