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Post: 47033469_1 created on Tue, 03 Feb 2009 00:56:37 +0000
Posted: Tue, 03 Feb 2009 00:56:37 +0000

http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101094453#title

^^I was wondering if i did okay, because i never wrote anything like that.

Is it scary as i hope?
Is it at all gory in the ending like i wanted?
COMMENTS / RATE there please.

&& Post your links up here, i'll read yours.

Y`kno, everybody wins.
i read yours, you read mine.

I been too lazy to go back and edit my story but I finally did it!**

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Post: 47033469_2 created on Tue, 03 Feb 2009 01:24:16 +0000
Posted: Tue, 03 Feb 2009 01:24:16 +0000

**Just make sure to post your link 4laugh

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Post: 47033469_3 created on Fri, 06 Feb 2009 22:46:11 +0000
Posted: Fri, 06 Feb 2009 22:46:11 +0000

I almost threw up...THAT MEANS ITS AWESOME!! I LOVE IT!!! 4laugh

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Post: 47033469_4 created on Sat, 07 Feb 2009 02:45:49 +0000
Posted: Sat, 07 Feb 2009 02:45:49 +0000

I rated/commented it smile

http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101096577#title
this story of mine needs some serious help but if you just want a shorter read, and want to boost my ego you could just read this;
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101096575#title

Thank you! 4laugh

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Post: 47033469_5 created on Sat, 07 Feb 2009 06:18:28 +0000
Posted: Sat, 07 Feb 2009 06:18:28 +0000

Wow, didn't see that ending. I totally thought he was asking for something else...

Scary? Yes, i definitely wouldn't want to be in that situation or dream it what's so ever.

Grotesque? Definitely. The guys isn't really a vampire, yeah? He's just some crazed delusional kid whose determined to be one, even though the impossibilities? Very cannibalistic.

I agree with the other posts. Dragging out her death would bump up the grotesque factor.