I thought we weren't supposed to advertise in this forum?

[Terraformed]

It's nothing but adverts now...
sister moon, be my guide

[radioactive alchemist]

Correct. You can't advertise.

But if you're asking for feedback/critique of your entry, well, that's pretty much what this forum is for, and it would be silly not to include a link to what you want critiqued. It's all outlined in the Rules and Guidelines announcement at the top of the forum. biggrin If you think a rule in there needs more clarification, please let me know.

[Terraformed]

stare k.
Can you please move this thread back to this forum?
I changed one of the words so it's following the rules now.
sister moon, be my guide