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Post: 46969467_1 created on Sat, 31 Jan 2009 16:33:01 +0000
Posted: Sat, 31 Jan 2009 16:33:01 +0000

Please read and rate them! Comment if u want.
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101086711#title
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=101085701#title

Tell me wat u think here too please. I need the ratings!

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Post: 46969467_2 created on Sat, 31 Jan 2009 16:36:35 +0000
Posted: Sat, 31 Jan 2009 16:36:35 +0000

Please guys.

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Post: 46969467_3 created on Sat, 31 Jan 2009 16:42:42 +0000
Posted: Sat, 31 Jan 2009 16:42:42 +0000

No one cares. :U

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Post: 46969467_4 created on Sat, 31 Jan 2009 16:51:26 +0000
Posted: Sat, 31 Jan 2009 16:51:26 +0000

The Fabulous Prince Babel

No one cares. :U

What's your dang problem? stare

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Post: 46969467_5 created on Sat, 31 Jan 2009 17:38:36 +0000
Posted: Sat, 31 Jan 2009 17:38:36 +0000

I don't understand the prolouge sweatdrop But I think you should use quotation marks for dialouge, ne?

But this is a nice quote

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People aren't afraid of the dark. They're afraid of what comes out of it.

But it's an interesting concept you have there... I'm still unclear as to what it's all about

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Post: 46969467_6 created on Sat, 31 Jan 2009 18:19:37 +0000
Posted: Sat, 31 Jan 2009 18:19:37 +0000

Greenninja6

The Fabulous Prince Babel

No one cares. :U

What's your dang problem? stare

There is no problem, only truth. This isn't the proper forum for this, so we see it as just a random, meaningless chunk of spam.

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Post: 46969467_7 created on Sat, 31 Jan 2009 18:33:15 +0000
Posted: Sat, 31 Jan 2009 18:33:15 +0000

SeraphicTune

I don't understand the prolouge sweatdrop But I think you should use quotation marks for dialouge, ne?

But this is a nice quote

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People aren't afraid of the dark. They're afraid of what comes out of it.

But it's an interesting concept you have there... I'm still unclear as to what it's all about

Huh? I did use quotation marks. I cut out more than half of chapter to put on gaia.

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Post: 46969467_8 created on Sat, 31 Jan 2009 18:34:31 +0000
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Eyeliner_Saint

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The Fabulous Prince Babel

No one cares. :U

What's your dang problem? stare

There is no problem, only truth. This isn't the proper forum for this, so we see it as just a random, meaningless chunk of spam.

It's the writers forum! These are stories.

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Post: 46969467_9 created on Sat, 31 Jan 2009 18:41:00 +0000
Posted: Sat, 31 Jan 2009 18:41:00 +0000

The subforums are there for a reason - use them.

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Post: 46969467_10 created on Sat, 31 Jan 2009 18:42:33 +0000
Posted: Sat, 31 Jan 2009 18:42:33 +0000

Greenninja6

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Greenninja6

The Fabulous Prince Babel

No one cares. :U

What's your dang problem? stare

There is no problem, only truth. This isn't the proper forum for this, so we see it as just a random, meaningless chunk of spam.

It's the writers forum! These are stories.

Read the rules, fool, and you'll see where you ******** up.

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Post: 46969467_11 created on Sat, 31 Jan 2009 22:33:29 +0000
Posted: Sat, 31 Jan 2009 22:33:29 +0000

Intresting...............................

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