thanks for all the critiques so far, and i really appreciate everyone's comments on the shortness of the sentences in Logic 3nodding
when i wrote it (about two years ago), i found that when i tried to do sarcasm, it worked better in short sentences than long ones...hence the short sentences..
but, you can't just start making masterpieces straightaway, can you? whee
so i shall try better next time i do a sarcastic piece xd