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Okay... so, I wrote an essay for college, submitted it, got a 96, and am very happy with that... but I can submit it later on in a final portfolio thing for other professors to look at so I can get into the next class up... or higher... BUT!!!!!!!!!! I am having problems changing my essay... I'm at the point where I've fallen in love with it... and that's a bad place to be when you need to edit something... eep! So... I've submitted it to the arena... and want as much feedback as possible.

http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/non-fiction/vote/?entry_id=100309097

Please be brutal... and Vote! and... if you leave a link to any arena post Ill vote and comment.
s**t... *changes link* i accidentally linked to someone else's writing! sweatdrop
crying only one other person has rated my writing... cheese_whine cheese_whine cheese_whine
There you good person : D
No problem. you can check out my writings either at the original pose or my arena :3

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