Okay... so, I wrote an essay for college, submitted it, got a 96, and am very happy with that... but I can submit it later on in a final portfolio thing for other professors to look at so I can get into the next class up... or higher... BUT!!!!!!!!!! I am having problems changing my essay... I'm at the point where I've fallen in love with it... and that's a bad place to be when you need to edit something... eep! So... I've submitted it to the arena... and want as much feedback as possible.