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Post: 44381301_1 created on Mon, 20 Oct 2008 02:06:56 +0000
Posted: Mon, 20 Oct 2008 02:06:56 +0000

Okay... so, I wrote an essay for college, submitted it, got a 96, and am very happy with that... but I can submit it later on in a final portfolio thing for other professors to look at so I can get into the next class up... or higher... BUT!!!!!!!!!! I am having problems changing my essay... I'm at the point where I've fallen in love with it... and that's a bad place to be when you need to edit something... eep! So... I've submitted it to the arena... and want as much feedback as possible.

http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/non-fiction/vote/?entry_id=100309097

Please be brutal... and Vote! and... if you leave a link to any arena post Ill vote and comment.

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Post: 44381301_2 created on Mon, 20 Oct 2008 02:19:34 +0000
Posted: Mon, 20 Oct 2008 02:19:34 +0000

s**t... *changes link* i accidentally linked to someone else's writing! sweatdrop

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Post: 44381301_3 created on Mon, 20 Oct 2008 03:49:34 +0000
Posted: Mon, 20 Oct 2008 03:49:34 +0000

crying only one other person has rated my writing... cheese_whine cheese_whine cheese_whine

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Post: 44381301_4 created on Mon, 20 Oct 2008 05:09:28 +0000
Posted: Mon, 20 Oct 2008 05:09:28 +0000

There you good person : D

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Post: 44381301_5 created on Mon, 20 Oct 2008 05:10:13 +0000
Posted: Mon, 20 Oct 2008 05:10:13 +0000

THANKS!

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Post: 44381301_6 created on Mon, 20 Oct 2008 05:15:29 +0000
Posted: Mon, 20 Oct 2008 05:15:29 +0000

No problem. you can check out my writings either at the original pose or my arena :3

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