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If you would all be so kind I would love it if you were to check it out and possibly even critique me a little. I heart comments and ratings and such. smile
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Please don't bump. This is a slow forum; there's not even a second page of threads yet, so bumping isn't necessary.
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Its so mysterious. I think its got the right amoutn of vagueness that makes you keep reading to see if it'll be eplained later on.
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Girl-Crazy Strawberry

It's well written, but it's a vampire story.


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Yeah that's one thing I didn't expect when I posted it. sweatdrop

I had this made up a while ago but posted it just for the heck of it....just to see what ppl would think....
i left a comment in the arena itself
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i left a comment in the arena itself


In reply to what you posted:

Actually it's not from Twilight; I wrote it BEFORE I read the book. It does kinda sound like Edward but nope. It was only based off a random comment I made to my friends one day, "God, why are humans so dumb?"

_-__-_zzzzzzazzzzzzzz generated a random number between 15 and 20 ... 16!

I love to write story too!!! Ive written a book its just not that good.... or published haha!!!! But i love the creative ideas around here!!! biggrin

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