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Post: 43992381_1 created on Sat, 04 Oct 2008 00:22:06 +0000
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My Arena entry

If you would all be so kind I would love it if you were to check it out and possibly even critique me a little. I heart comments and ratings and such. smile

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Post: 43992381_2 created on Sat, 04 Oct 2008 18:58:11 +0000
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Post: 43992381_5 created on Mon, 06 Oct 2008 01:09:24 +0000
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Please don't bump. This is a slow forum; there's not even a second page of threads yet, so bumping isn't necessary.

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Post: 43992381_6 created on Tue, 14 Oct 2008 19:08:38 +0000
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Its so mysterious. I think its got the right amoutn of vagueness that makes you keep reading to see if it'll be eplained later on.

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Post: 43992381_7 created on Sun, 19 Oct 2008 19:15:43 +0000
Posted: Sun, 19 Oct 2008 19:15:43 +0000

It's well written, but it's a vampire story.

That is all.

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Post: 43992381_8 created on Sun, 19 Oct 2008 20:42:51 +0000
Posted: Sun, 19 Oct 2008 20:42:51 +0000

Yeah that's one thing I didn't expect when I posted it. sweatdrop

I had this made up a while ago but posted it just for the heck of it....just to see what ppl would think....

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Post: 43992381_9 created on Sun, 02 Nov 2008 01:25:48 +0000
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i left a comment in the arena itself

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Post: 43992381_10 created on Sun, 02 Nov 2008 21:46:12 +0000
Posted: Sun, 02 Nov 2008 21:46:12 +0000

SRD sakura

i left a comment in the arena itself

In reply to what you posted:

Actually it's not from Twilight; I wrote it BEFORE I read the book. It does kinda sound like Edward but nope. It was only based off a random comment I made to my friends one day, "God, why are humans so dumb?"

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Post: 43992381_11 created on Sat, 08 Nov 2008 21:13:55 +0000
Posted: Sat, 08 Nov 2008 21:13:55 +0000

I love to write story too!!! Ive written a book its just not that good.... or published haha!!!! But i love the creative ideas around here!!! biggrin

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