A Poem and a Story

[Flacks]

The Antagonists - Poem

Of Being Human - Story


All comments are appreciated, and concrit is encouraged.

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[Gravetye]

Rated and commented. I really liked both pieces, though I think the poem was my favorite (probably because I tend to sympathize with the antagonist, too). You are an incredibly talented writer. I hope you submit more.

And...if it's not too much trouble, could you rate or comment on something of mine as well?


The End of Something
Eclipsed
Cold Fire

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Gravetye

Rated and commented. I really liked both pieces, though I think the poem was my favorite (probably because I tend to sympathize with the antagonist, too). You are an incredibly talented writer. I hope you submit more.

And...if it's not too much trouble, could you rate or comment on something of mine as well?


The End of Something
Eclipsed
Cold Fire

Thank you. :]

I rated and commented on all of yours, I think Cold Fire was my favourite one. Gave a 5 for The End of Something and Cold Fire, and a 4 to Eclipsed.
I hope you keep writing, too, I really enjoy your work. =]