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*if you don't know what Wattpad is it is a website were you can read story that people write. You can even put up your own story for others to read*

Hi my name is brianna! My wattpad username is briannaxoxo22. Please check out my work.


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It's nice if you can update frequently, the readers on that are very demanding and can quickly lose interest. But out can be very rewarding when you have a thousand fans. And you're first thousand reads. I almost cried in fact i think i did XD.
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It's nice if you can update frequently, the readers on that are very demanding and can quickly lose interest. But out can be very rewarding when you have a thousand fans. And you're first thousand reads. I almost cried in fact i think i did XD.

Are you talking about me or like in general? I was off wattpad for awhile I just got back on and I am trying to upload every other weekend. I would upload every weekend but my mom doesn't have internet. Would you read my poems or my story and tell me what you think? I would appreciate it. smile
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It's nice if you can update frequently, the readers on that are very demanding and can quickly lose interest. But out can be very rewarding when you have a thousand fans. And you're first thousand reads. I almost cried in fact i think i did XD.

Are you talking about me or like in general? I was off wattpad for awhile I just got back on and I am trying to upload every other weekend. I would upload every weekend but my mom doesn't have internet. Would you read my poems or my story and tell me what you think? I would appreciate it. smile

You should get the wattpad app XD/ sure i will read it
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It's nice if you can update frequently, the readers on that are very demanding and can quickly lose interest. But out can be very rewarding when you have a thousand fans. And you're first thousand reads. I almost cried in fact i think i did XD.

Are you talking about me or like in general? I was off wattpad for awhile I just got back on and I am trying to upload every other weekend. I would upload every weekend but my mom doesn't have internet. Would you read my poems or my story and tell me what you think? I would appreciate it. smile

You should get the wattpad app XD/ sure i will read it

Thanks. Please comment I would like to know what you think. I can take criticism. I have the app and it is awesome but I wouldn't want to upload from that because of spelling error or gramatical errors.
You can upload it and not publish it so that way when you log on you can edit and publish and get more done :3 and poems are hard to make bad so i will critique your story as harsh as possible :3
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You can upload it and not publish it so that way when you log on you can edit and publish and get more done :3 and poems are hard to make bad so i will critique your story as harsh as possible :3

Still I would rather not upload that way. Thanks. I appreciate it. When I came back on wattpad I tryed to get my fan to notice that I was back on but didn't work so I am going to try my best with upload and improving my writings.
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You can upload it and not publish it so that way when you log on you can edit and publish and get more done :3 and poems are hard to make bad so i will critique your story as harsh as possible :3

Still I would rather not upload that way. Thanks. I appreciate it. When I came back on wattpad I tryed to get my fan to notice that I was back on but didn't work so I am going to try my best with upload and improving my writings.
good,i hope for the best and i will help you with any step you would like.
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You can upload it and not publish it so that way when you log on you can edit and publish and get more done :3 and poems are hard to make bad so i will critique your story as harsh as possible :3

Still I would rather not upload that way. Thanks. I appreciate it. When I came back on wattpad I tryed to get my fan to notice that I was back on but didn't work so I am going to try my best with upload and improving my writings.
good,i hope for the best and i will help you with any step you would like.

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!! Your the best smile
Your welcome XD
I don't have a wattpad account but I keep thinking about getting one. Would you say it's a better place to get reviews than say, ff.net or fictionpress? I always like feedback and almost never get any, lol.
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I don't have a wattpad account but I keep thinking about getting one. Would you say it's a better place to get reviews than say, ff.net or fictionpress? I always like feedback and almost never get any, lol.

Wattpad has millions of user. If you update frequently and you are a good writer you should have a problem with reads/comment/votes. I don't know what ff.net is or fictionpress is but I would have to say yes because of how popular wattpad is. If you do get a wattpad please check out my work. I would appreciate it.
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I don't care for John or amy very much, although your side characters seem pretty strong.
Personally I don't care for battered woman and weak man couples. They are very over done lifetime murdered and raped it and keeps it in a dungeon.
However, it's still early in the story and I see the story going a few ways.
1. Nate saves her, like in most movies.
2. She grows over time and through development gets stronger then him and leaves.
3. Chelsea tells Amy she is being abused as well and together they work out the problems.(girl power)
4.John turns into a killer and Amy kills him.
Those are the most commonly used routes in this kind of story and you should avoid using this.
Try too be innovative and it will be fine.
From what I noticed on my cell phone a few I's were placed as "i" and a few words were mispelled. Also some of the info in gym class part seemed unnecessary. However it isn't awful, the story is very easy to follow which is always good as a the story flows very well from one part to the next.
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I don't care for John or amy very much, although your side characters seem pretty strong.
Personally I don't care for battered woman and weak man couples. They are very over done lifetime murdered and raped it and keeps it in a dungeon.
However, it's still early in the story and I see the story going a few ways.
1. Nate saves her, like in most movies.
2. She grows over time and through development gets stronger then him and leaves.
3. Chelsea tells Amy she is being abused as well and together they work out the problems.(girl power)
4.John turns into a killer and Amy kills him.
Those are the most commonly used routes in this kind of story and you should avoid using this.
Try too be innovative and it will be fine.
From what I noticed on my cell phone a few I's were placed as "i" and a few words were mispelled. Also some of the info in gym class part seemed unnecessary. However it isn't awful, the story is very easy to follow which is always good as a the story flows very well from one
part to the next.

This actually wasn't my first story on wattpad. This is like my third book idea. My other two(weren't completed) were up but I wanted fix them and work on them a bit and make a couple chapters ahead of time. I am thinking about putting those to up again.
The routes that you thought the story was going to go wasn't what I was thinking for the story. There is a reason for Johns actions which will be explained in later on chapters. As you can tell chapter 6 was longer then the rest because that is when I got back on wattpad and decided to make every chapter I write atleast 3 pages. Any mistakes are from when I use notebook. Now I use words and it help me correct mistakes and "i". I was going to go back and fix all of it soon. The gym scene was put in there to introduce a new character and to kind of get to know how she fits in the plot. I am glad the story flows because I believe that it a little hard to accomplish for some writer and I am glad I can accomplish that. Thanks for reviewing my story. I love the criticism.

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