Vampire/Autism story help!

[Alberic of Krufton]

Momo_White Shinigami

Yeah, you probably can't get away with that sort of slang..good luck on your project though!~

And yeah, it was part of a series. I only read the first book though..and yeah, I myself forget the reason, and why deficiencies has been done, colors don't seem to be a good reason. At least, to me.

Thanks. sweatdrop Probably bastardize something from my conlang if I really need something, but it was more of a "oh hey here's a cool word, I might be able to use it maybe?" Turns out no, but it's still a cool word.

Now colors on their own make little sense to me, but if they're related to nutrition (as they generally are) then it'd be different. But I dunno I always liked my fiction more grounded in reality and less fanciful.

[Momo_White Shinigami]

Alberic of Krufton

Momo_White Shinigami

Yeah, you probably can't get away with that sort of slang..good luck on your project though!~

And yeah, it was part of a series. I only read the first book though..and yeah, I myself forget the reason, and why deficiencies has been done, colors don't seem to be a good reason. At least, to me.

Thanks. sweatdrop Probably bastardize something from my conlang if I really need something, but it was more of a "oh hey here's a cool word, I might be able to use it maybe?" Turns out no, but it's still a cool word.

Now colors on their own make little sense to me, but if they're related to nutrition (as they generally are) then it'd be different. But I dunno I always liked my fiction more grounded in reality and less fanciful.

Well, maybe you can use it somewhere else someday. sweatdrop

Yeah..same here. If the colors issue actually made sense, I could maybe let it slide, but since it doesn't..it doesn't really sit well with me.

[marshmallowcreampie]

Momo_White Shinigami

Well, maybe you can use it somewhere else someday. sweatdrop

Yeah..same here. If the colors issue actually made sense, I could maybe let it slide, but since it doesn't..it doesn't really sit well with me.

I sort of accept that on the assumption that vampires are magic.

[Momo_White Shinigami]

marshmallowcreampie

Momo_White Shinigami

Well, maybe you can use it somewhere else someday. sweatdrop

Yeah..same here. If the colors issue actually made sense, I could maybe let it slide, but since it doesn't..it doesn't really sit well with me.

I sort of accept that on the assumption that vampires are magic.

I don't think that vampires and magic are the same thing. Vampires are supernatural creatures and can do magic when they're running about, but I don't think that they're the same thing.

[marshmallowcreampie]

Momo_White Shinigami

marshmallowcreampie

Momo_White Shinigami

Well, maybe you can use it somewhere else someday. sweatdrop

Yeah..same here. If the colors issue actually made sense, I could maybe let it slide, but since it doesn't..it doesn't really sit well with me.

I sort of accept that on the assumption that vampires are magic.

I don't think that vampires and magic are the same thing. Vampires are supernatural creatures and can do magic when they're running about, but I don't think that they're the same thing.

Eh, I think it depends on what the OP goes with, really.

[Momo_White Shinigami]

marshmallowcreampie

Momo_White Shinigami

marshmallowcreampie

Momo_White Shinigami

Well, maybe you can use it somewhere else someday. sweatdrop

Yeah..same here. If the colors issue actually made sense, I could maybe let it slide, but since it doesn't..it doesn't really sit well with me.

I sort of accept that on the assumption that vampires are magic.

I don't think that vampires and magic are the same thing. Vampires are supernatural creatures and can do magic when they're running about, but I don't think that they're the same thing.

Eh, I think it depends on what the OP goes with, really.

True, true. It does depend on how she wants the whole thing to turn out..

[The Kitten Meow]

I like the sound of that. It is very different and has a lot of potential. I think you should stick to it. It isn't your usual vampire story and isn't at all cliché.