Ophelianime
Okay here's the thing, I've been working on this story in my mind for the past seven years and I think I'm about ready to sit down and write it out, but I'm stuck on a few things
So I was hoping that some individuals might be willing to help me work out some of the details
Here's the first part
there's this sixteen year-old girl called Rose Friday who finds this device (which she decides to name the shifter) that can take her to parallel universes
now here's the sticking point, I'm not exactly sure how I want her to find it
here's a few of the ideas I came up with
She's going to the library when it just blasts from the sky in front of her
She's just broken up with a friend and accidently drives/bikes into a ditch where she finds it
She's shopping at a yard sale and finds in in this old dresser/hope chest
and for that matter, which universe should I put her in first?
The Fairy Universe where all the elves and goblins are?
The Steampunk Universe?
Or the Medieval Universe, where society is still in the dark ages?
And also, what should be her reaction sequence upon finding that she's been put in another universe and can't get back to her own?
slightly confused followed by excited, followed by dismayed?
excited followed by dismayed, followed by denial?
or worried, followed by sad, followed by hopeful?
I have also worked on a parallel universe story. They are definitely not the easiest pieces to write. Okay, some questions to answer for yourself (and me):
1) Where did this device come from? Who made it? Why was it made? Answers here could help develop a backstory for the device itself, giving you an idea of where might be a logical place for it to be found.
2) What kind of girl is Rose? What makes her a good candidate for this device? Can anyone use the device, if so, why has not one else discovered it? Her reaction to receiving the device will be in line with what kind of person she is. Is she overly anxious, and upon discovery that she is in a different universe, panicky? Afraid? Or is she brave, and already saving someone's life before she has time to contemplate the fact that she's so far from home?
3) Is the goal to find a way home? If not, then why doesn't she want to go home? If she does want to go home, is it because the other universe is scary? Overwhelming?
Answer these questions--not that they are easy to answer, and you might well be on your way. Hope this helps!