The Story of SilentHeart and Treble (could use some feedback

[foxy ninja 14]

These are the two parents for my oc musicalHeart

Mother:
Treble
Earth pony
Serous - blunt- misunderstood- troublemaking
Treble parents where strict as can be making sure each of their 3 daughters would be talented classical musician. Trebles older sisters where perfectionist each of them excelling in classical music one way or another. Though Classical was never this ponies taste in music she never understood why her family loved it so much. Now metal that was what Treble called music! Mane banging tail whipping how she loved it! The power and the beat also the heart throbbing lyrics . She tried to share the excitement she was feeling with her family ,though her family didnt understand and all of them scolded her which caused her heart to grow cold . From then on Treble turned into a trouble maker never listening to what anyone says or doing what was ask of her. No one told Treble what to do she bang along to her own metal drum. She had one rule there where no rules. Why do they hate the music she loved so much? Maybe it was here that they hated?

Father:
SilentHeart
Earth pony
Mute
silly- happy go lucky- funny - outgoing

When he was in his mother belly he was always bouncing around when it came to him being born they could have sworn he would come out giggling. To the shock of both his parents they hard nothing but silence. His mouth was babbling away but no sounds made its way passed his lips. Fortunately enough there was nothing seriously wrong with the new born foal his vocal cords just didnt seem to work. As the years went on Silentheart didnt let the fact that he was mute to bring him down not one bit! He would always do his best to make people laugh because that was his favorite type of sound of all time. Silent once heard the others mares talking about how the sound have music made them happy. Though he tried his best trying to play every instrument under the sun he just didnt hold the skill to play anything. That is when he stumbled onto some funny looking masks in a costume shop and he listen to the stories that where told and it made him smile. From there on he would always stop by the Mask shop to see what new masks where in and what stories they held.

[foxy ninja 14]

The Story of them..

Silent and Treble never really noticed each other in school. Silent always tended to be busy keeping everyone happy while Treble just kept to herself and causing trouble for the teacher and students. Though after a few years Treble kind of faded from everyones mind while Silent opened up his own Mask shop and also built a little stage in the back of his shop for ponies to share a life in his silly stories and colorful masks.

One day a Mare came into the shop and started looking around the two of the ponies eyes met but what he felt was not love actually he felt nothing no emotions could be shown through the eyes of he mare who wore a frown and had music blasting through her headphones. He tried to get her attention ,but his every attempt failed. He then remembered the mares name is was his trouble making school mate Treble. It made him sad to see that she hadnt change at all since they where in school together. He made up his mind that he would make her laugh! So from their he came up with the plan to invite her to his play to get her to laugh! He would personally keep inviting Treble to every play ,but everytime she the mare was no where to be seen.

Now Treble got fed up with the silly Stallion and angryly trotted up to Silent "What makes you think ill want to seat through one of your stupid plays!" she yelled at him. The stallion smiled noticing that she had her headphones around her neck and not on her ears. He then handed her a flyer to a play titled 'Family Problems the musical' the mare raised her eye brow and sighed "If i go will you leave me alone?" she said coldly the stallion nodded delightfully and waved goodbye as he got ready for the show.


A the play started Treble came in just in time to hear classical music start playing she rolled her eyes wanting to get this over will and sat in the back. The story was about how families have problems ,but in the end they stick together. The mares face kept to its normal emotionless state. Silent trotted confidently to Treble at the end of the show to get her opinion and hopefully a laugh. What came out of the mare's mouth was his worst fears coming to light. The Mare cleared her throat "THAT WAS ANYTHING ,BUT FUNNY. THE MUSIC WAS HORRIBLE THE LINES WHERE HORRIBLE AND THE MASKS BELONG IN THE TRASH!" Treble said harshly walking away from the Stallion. On her walk home though she was not listening to her music which she normally would do ,but instead was actually thinking of the events that passed.

Him trying to get her attention and trying to get her to actually laugh? Now that was a thought thought! Suddenly her lips curled up and a burst of laughter came out of her mouth which caught the attention of Silent who was about to walking into his home. His spirits suddenly lifted and he trotted up to her and was beaming with happyness he did it ! Her laugh was one of the best laugh he had ever heard next to his mothers.

The mare bit her lip "Okay so it wasnt that bad... But you need better music and not that Classical crap something that would keep peoples attention on the stage" she suggested to him. Silent just nodded nervously he had no talent in music he motion for her to follow him instead to his house and she followed and saw all of the papers on the floor of what seemed to be music "YOu really have no ear for music you know that right?" she told him and he nodded and give out a silent laugh. Treble picked up some of the papers they where horrible she felt kind of bad for him the music was a big part of the play and she did notice that there wasnt many ponies there. She made a life turning choice that would bring them close in the followed days that pass "I guess i could help you" she said and Silent could see a bit of a smile forming on the mares face.

Years passed and Silent and Treble unknownly fell in love with each other getting Treble to open up about her family and Silent actually got her to go back and talk to her family which bought her family closer together. Her sisters of course teased her about how in love the two ponies where it hadnt been till that point she actually thought about it in that way. Silent had later on went to her parents house and he wanted to show both her parents the newest play he had wrote and it was about a marriage proposal and the parents understood that it was his way to ask for their permission to marry their daughter Treble. They told him "Well you seem to really get her to open up we be honored to have you in the family" they told him with smiles "We will even help you with the music for the play" . Silent Cringed at the thought of having the one music Treble didnt like in the play. Trebles sisters laughed "Dont worry Silent we can help out and maybe we can make a mixture of the two?" they both then ran off to their room excited to get started .

So it was set the actors the music and of course the awesome masks made by Silent heart. Treble was hurt when she found out he made a play without her ,but she hide that she was and watched it. She had to admit the music was a awesome mixture of metal and yes classical. By the end of the play Trebles father came out and asked Treble and Silent to the stage she went along thinking it might be for the final bow. Suddenly Silent proposed which made Treble face turn pink that she didnt even know was possible for her. Seeing her sisters come out and giggle she glared at them in a ill get you back for this. Her heart was speeding and Silent looked nervous wanting for her replay then it hit her this play was for her and made by the people she loved. Of course she said yes!

After a few months of marriage her hearing began to fade because of how much loud metal music she was listening to when she was younger. The doctor said she had to turn the volume down before she loses her hearing permanently. So she slowed down on her head banging music. She actually picked up a teaching job at the local community center teaching troubled kids how to compose music. With the help of her Speical Somepony they let the students compose and play out their own plays or musical on Silent's stage.

Within a few months after they where married they were expecting. Both parents where excited and strangely enough through the time Treble was pregnant all she wanted to listen to was classical music which she once hated so much.

When they had their first born who was a pretty shade of blue and had bright yellow hair that remained of the sky and sun. Thats when they decided on too name her MusicalHeart since it was a Musical which bought them where they where today.