The First Line

[The Cricketeer]

While discussing literature with my dad, we realized the importance of the first line in the story. This is mine.
"Drew opened the door, his nose instantly assaulted by the thick, musty smell of old Chinese takeout and Dr. Pepper."


What's yours?

[SerotoninSyndrome]

"Father of a frog, he was too dim-witted to realize that an extraordinary opening sentence can capture almost any reader."


Jk haha x3

[The Cricketeer]

D3vl4r

"Father of a frog, he was too dim-witted to realize that an extraordinary opening sentence can capture almost any reader."


Jk haha x3

That doesn't make sense. He had told me that, so he could indeed, realize that.
(And at first I didn't get the frog thing, so it soured me on your joke.) xd

[Desi the fuzzy fluffhead]

I’ve known for a long time that the world is full of horrible situations, people, things, and worst of all cats.

[The Cricketeer]

Desi the fuzzy fluffhead

I’ve known for a long time that the world is full of horrible situations, people, things, and worst of all, cats.

Fixed! And quite an interesting line.

[Ninja Demon_Slayer 90]

Names Joe, short for Joelin. (yup that's it)

[eduardo galpaleano]

"The following is a critical analysis and translation of our Lord's personal logs at the time of his rise to power, as presented by Dolores Thurston, Ph.D."

[[.Ichigo-Chan.]]

My eyes slowly open; the sun is bright, far too bright, so I let my world go black again.

[Music -Misfit-]

I am the Music...

My name is Rosemary Renee Evans, and I am the luckiest person in the world— at least, I have to be the luckiest seventeen year old girl in Calistoga, California.

...that you should be listening to.

[Old Man Maj]

The Cricketeer

Desi the fuzzy fluffhead

I’ve known for a long time that the world is full of horrible situations, people, things, and, worst of all, cats.

Fixed! And quite an interesting line.

Fix'd.

[Triple Dare]

"It was, of course, a day not unlike any other; part mundane, part mayhem, and partly spent on something akin to cloud seven--not up there with the nines, but surely closer to perfection than a six."

[Sinnui]

I knew my bad was going to be terrible because I fell flat on my face and broke my nose, in front of the one person that is like pure evil and who just laughed and took a picture of me, just to send to everyone she knows.

[The Cricketeer]

Reliquian

I knew my bad was going to be terrible because I fell flat on my face and broke my nose, in front of the one person that is like pure evil and who just laughed and took a picture of me, just to send to everyone she knows.

I don't understand the first eight words. Could you explain it?

[Desi the fuzzy fluffhead]

Sand in your Majina

The Cricketeer

Desi the fuzzy fluffhead

I’ve known for a long time that the world is full of horrible situations, people, things, and, worst of all, cats.

Fixed! And quite an interesting line.

Fix'd.

I hate commas, they are vile little monsters.
Thanks, sweatdrop .

[The Cricketeer]

Desi the fuzzy fluffhead

Sand in your Majina

The Cricketeer

Desi the fuzzy fluffhead

I’ve known for a long time that the world is full of horrible situations, people, things, and, worst of all, cats.

Fixed! And quite an interesting line.

Fix'd.

I hate commas, they are vile little monsters.
Thanks, sweatdrop .

That's the best way I've ever heard them described. xd