I have a prolouge to a story, I dont want to post it cause its pretty long but if you want me to PM it too you I will. I need some advice and plot help... The prolouges pretty weird too.
Havent been on for a few hours sorry, thanks for all of your help. My friends think I should keep Kalman because I mispronouced his name once and called him cowman. They made up a song about him that goes to the spider man theme song.
Cowman, Cowman
Doing all the things that cows can
Eats some hay
Then some grass
then goes out to kick some...
I like Kanrik.. Kalman sounds like "Sandman" to me.. Lol. It's a good one too, but. I like Kanrik more, sounds.. heavier, if you can pick up on what I'm trying to discribe.