Bloodbayne
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- Posted: Sun, 22 Aug 2004 19:58:10 +0000
MAJOR EDIT: okay I know what the title says but after much consideration the whole vamp thing is crap *sigh* this is just a concept I came up with for an potential story I have in mind, problem is I was orginally thinking vampires intially but now that I've looked back at how its set up its just not going to work that way and I refuse to call them demons (which, if no one has noticed is equally over used) I'm currently on the hunt to rename them, please any suggestions would do.
Right now my mind is firing off at max trying to come up with something to write(I've been in a writers slump for years and I"m trying to get back into writing with this project of mine)
Anyways, as well all know Vampires are as played out as elves, werewolves, and furries which prompted me to try something different (especially after watching Blood: The last vampire)
Anyways here's my vision. Now rather then your traditional vampires who are usually the pretty people who hang out in night clubs and what not (or depending on what time period you place them aristocrats or whatever) I see vampires as more like...well insects of sorts...let me explain
Vampire hieracrhy:
Grand/Holy Mother- She is essentialy kinda like a queen ant. Grand/Holy Mothers come about when a female vampire(perferably if she's the only one left) devours the remains of the orginal Grand Mother and then after some time she finds a sutiable place where her body transforms becoming a tower of throbbing flesh with four massive appendages at the base(each one has a set of jaws and tentcles to draw bodies into them) however inside this tower of flesh is the Grand Mothers true form which would be her torso only now attached to this mountain of flesh. Since the Grand Mother cannot move from where spot she relies on her ghouls (which will be explained) to bring her human bodies which she can devour and normally it only takes one full grown human to keep her alive and breed ghouls out of her body, however if and when she wishes she can command her ghouls to bring her an abundance of bodies (usually like a thousand people) which enables her to have enough energy to breed a vampire who will always be female and should anything happen and only one vamp survives she can devour her mother's flesh and continue the process all over again.
Vampires- Now these are a step down from the Grand Mother, they are always female just like an Queen bee or Ant makes females that will potentially make future queens. They are human in appearance but have the ability to transform into rather gruesome forms (havn't gotten to describing them yet) The Grand Mother usually never has more then 4 daughters as there is always the possiblity that the sisters will fight amongst themselves or even try to kill the Grand Mother and take her place if she isn't killed. Since they are second in power they have control over Ghouls as well though they will always respond to the Grand Mother if she commands them herself.
Ghouls- These are the creatures the make up the majority and kinda function like worker/soldier ants or bees. they to can assume human form as well and do not require blood to live as there task is to bring humans for the vampires and the Grand Mother to feast upon. There are also Ghouls that do not assume human forms and are usually created to performs specific tasks like guardian certain areas and what not. They are not affected by sun light but are not active untill night fall
Ayouls- These are a special breed of ghouls which are created when a Vampire actcually bites a human. Their power and skill vary but they have the ability to transform into beastly like creatures at will and their powers is second only to the vampires and the Grand Mother, usually they are the ones who command the lesser ghouls in the Vampires stead.
Overall it functions like a giant colony of sorts, the ghouls do the hunting for the vampires (note: if anyone can find a better name I'd gladly appreciate, specificly anything that means daughters and of course a better name for the Grand Mother) they have magic like abilities that allow them to cast illusions and what not to hide themsleves from.
anyways what do you think? this is just the basic rough draft of sorts and revisions will be made as opinions come in.
Right now my mind is firing off at max trying to come up with something to write(I've been in a writers slump for years and I"m trying to get back into writing with this project of mine)
Anyways, as well all know Vampires are as played out as elves, werewolves, and furries which prompted me to try something different (especially after watching Blood: The last vampire)
Anyways here's my vision. Now rather then your traditional vampires who are usually the pretty people who hang out in night clubs and what not (or depending on what time period you place them aristocrats or whatever) I see vampires as more like...well insects of sorts...let me explain
Vampire hieracrhy:
Grand/Holy Mother- She is essentialy kinda like a queen ant. Grand/Holy Mothers come about when a female vampire(perferably if she's the only one left) devours the remains of the orginal Grand Mother and then after some time she finds a sutiable place where her body transforms becoming a tower of throbbing flesh with four massive appendages at the base(each one has a set of jaws and tentcles to draw bodies into them) however inside this tower of flesh is the Grand Mothers true form which would be her torso only now attached to this mountain of flesh. Since the Grand Mother cannot move from where spot she relies on her ghouls (which will be explained) to bring her human bodies which she can devour and normally it only takes one full grown human to keep her alive and breed ghouls out of her body, however if and when she wishes she can command her ghouls to bring her an abundance of bodies (usually like a thousand people) which enables her to have enough energy to breed a vampire who will always be female and should anything happen and only one vamp survives she can devour her mother's flesh and continue the process all over again.
Vampires- Now these are a step down from the Grand Mother, they are always female just like an Queen bee or Ant makes females that will potentially make future queens. They are human in appearance but have the ability to transform into rather gruesome forms (havn't gotten to describing them yet) The Grand Mother usually never has more then 4 daughters as there is always the possiblity that the sisters will fight amongst themselves or even try to kill the Grand Mother and take her place if she isn't killed. Since they are second in power they have control over Ghouls as well though they will always respond to the Grand Mother if she commands them herself.
Ghouls- These are the creatures the make up the majority and kinda function like worker/soldier ants or bees. they to can assume human form as well and do not require blood to live as there task is to bring humans for the vampires and the Grand Mother to feast upon. There are also Ghouls that do not assume human forms and are usually created to performs specific tasks like guardian certain areas and what not. They are not affected by sun light but are not active untill night fall
Ayouls- These are a special breed of ghouls which are created when a Vampire actcually bites a human. Their power and skill vary but they have the ability to transform into beastly like creatures at will and their powers is second only to the vampires and the Grand Mother, usually they are the ones who command the lesser ghouls in the Vampires stead.
Overall it functions like a giant colony of sorts, the ghouls do the hunting for the vampires (note: if anyone can find a better name I'd gladly appreciate, specificly anything that means daughters and of course a better name for the Grand Mother) they have magic like abilities that allow them to cast illusions and what not to hide themsleves from.
anyways what do you think? this is just the basic rough draft of sorts and revisions will be made as opinions come in.