Invisible Healer

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Wonder if this place is the right place through...

Sorry for the grammatical errors - English is not my first language. emo

Quote:
There was a boy that have been alienated by the community because he was an illegitimate child - everyone told him that his mother committed adultery. His mother died when giving birth to him, so he hated his mother more.
When he was older, his mother's best friend adopted him and told him that his mother was actually been raped by someone that was respected by the community - who loved his mother, but she liked someone else. It seemed that no one believed her, even her parents. She even keep his mother's diary, that reveals what actually happened before her death.
When he reached adulthood, he worked at the company founded by the man who raped his mother, wanted to take revenge on him. It was revealed that that man didn't expect that the boy survived (he moved outside the community prior to the woman's death), and blamed himself for the death of the woman he raped. He hid the truth as his company was growing, and he didn't want to tarnish his image as a 'good gentleman' on that time.


Can anyone suggest a better way on how the boy reveal himself to that man? I think him appearing in front of the man carrying a gun or a knife was kinda... cliche. sweatdrop