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Post: 39861061_1 created on Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:15 pmPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:15 pm
Just would like to know:
How many People think it's a good idea to Make the Bad guy of the Story in to an ally of the Main Character?

I Know It's Been Done Before But I Need help Push My Story Along.
If You Need Any info On My Story Let Me Know and I'll post a Brief Summary Of My Story

Plz, Help Me Make A Decision ....
 
     
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Post: 39861061_2 created on Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:20 pmPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:20 pm
 
Pssst! You want to go here for this kind of advice.
     
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Post: 39861061_3 created on Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:34 pmPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:34 pm
thank you
 
     
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Post: 39861061_4 created on Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:37 pmPosted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 8:37 pm
 
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thank you

You're welcome...you'll probably get more helpful advice there anways, than from a bunch of random anime kids. (Though there are quite a few here who take writing seriously too)
     
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Post: 39861061_5 created on Tue Apr 22, 2008 12:13 amPosted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 12:13 am
 
     
 
 
 
 


:: I take writing seriously. I too am writing a story.
I don't see anything wrong with turning an enemy
into an ally. :3 ♥ ::
 
 
 
 
     
 
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Post: 39861061_6 created on Tue Apr 22, 2008 12:16 amPosted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 12:16 am
 
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:: I take writing seriously. I too am writing a story.
I don't see anything wrong with turning an enemy
into an ally. :3 ♥ ::



While that is true, improperly done it can ruin the character.
I personally find it pathetic when some uber badass that killed indiscriminately becomes a good guy when he realizes he did some mistakes, and then he turns into a bleeding heart, and what more, everyone seems to forget that he used to be a psychotic killer.
     
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Post: 39861061_7 created on Tue Apr 22, 2008 12:22 amPosted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 12:22 am
im writting one and some of the main charicters friends are huge bad guys. im on my second book, and its pretty awsome.
 
     
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Post: 39861061_8 created on Tue Apr 22, 2008 12:23 amPosted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 12:23 am
 
When in doubt, have the girl get pregnant.

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Post: 39861061_9 created on Mon Apr 28, 2008 1:50 amPosted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 1:50 am
     
 
Well here's a rough summary of it the main bad guy is actually working towards the greater good for humanity but has personally messed up the life of the main character's life
 
     
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Post: 39861061_10 created on Mon Apr 28, 2008 3:19 amPosted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 3:19 am
 
what ever you do don't have the ex-bad guy constantly thinking about getting back at the main character even after he goes good, that gets real annoying.
     
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