Wynnn
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- Posted: Sat, 08 Jan 2005 00:13:21 +0000
Akirai
since u commented on my story it's my turn now ain't it blaugh ?
well maybe Joe's fallen on some rough times and tries to steal from Wes but Wes sees her and immediately falls in love with her. It also depends if you want them too fall in love or just be great friends... if you want friends you might say that Joe's begging somewhere and still doesn't have any food at midnight and is huddling somewhere and crying her eyes out till Wes comes to rescue her by bringing her to his mothers house it'd also give you an opening to let Wes explain his past
BTW I was thinking of a boy-boy and possibly to let one grow up as royalty and the other as a very gifted student which because of his Talent (Mind) will become a diplomate and has always been great friends with the prince in this case I'll think I'll let the prince go evil, fall from his throne and let mostly through a series of accidentle braveries let the student succeed the throne. But I'll see, normally once I start writing the story kinda unfolds as long as I have a solid beginning.
well maybe Joe's fallen on some rough times and tries to steal from Wes but Wes sees her and immediately falls in love with her. It also depends if you want them too fall in love or just be great friends... if you want friends you might say that Joe's begging somewhere and still doesn't have any food at midnight and is huddling somewhere and crying her eyes out till Wes comes to rescue her by bringing her to his mothers house it'd also give you an opening to let Wes explain his past
BTW I was thinking of a boy-boy and possibly to let one grow up as royalty and the other as a very gifted student which because of his Talent (Mind) will become a diplomate and has always been great friends with the prince in this case I'll think I'll let the prince go evil, fall from his throne and let mostly through a series of accidentle braveries let the student succeed the throne. But I'll see, normally once I start writing the story kinda unfolds as long as I have a solid beginning.
Ooh, I like the twin becoming the prince's successor. Nice idea. I'm very fond of the good guy turning evil idea.
And thanks for the comment, but Joe and Wes don't fall in love. Not in the traditional sense, anyway. I do like the idea of Joe stealing from Wes, though! I might play around with that... whee As for Joe crying, it's not in her character to do that, but nice shot. She's just too strong to break down over a day without food. And Wes wouldn't so freely go to the whores, anyway, because he's too independent. He'd have to be REALLY desperate. But I appreciate the ideas. Actually, everything you said planted a few plot seeds in my mind. Thanks.
Anyone else?