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ami. DD: but you're welcome!
and THERE. paragraph that broke the 50K:
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Matthias was between them before he realized he had even acted; it was like the interference with Raelynn all over again. This time, he refused to let it get to that boiling point. “Just stop it,” he hissed as he pushed them back with one hand each and squared his stance between them, “both of you. You both want to pretend like you’re so much better than her? Act like it.”
i am done. now taking a month-long break from this accursed novel to properly plot it out and start rewriting its father book. win win! thanks for the support, everyone!!