Just something Im fiddling with.

[SpencerStrike]

So for a while I've been fooling with this in my head, and in MW(microsoft word)
Tell me if you think it makes a good plot, storyline, whathaveyou.

So a girl, named Erica, she lives in a magical world. And she comes upon a device, she's never seen it before, but quickly learns it can show her the future. The only problem is she doesnt know when, meaning the time, year, day, and such, into the future she is being shown. She has to figure it out in time to stop whatever will happen, was shown to her.

Like I said, I've just been fooling with it in my head.

[CezzaXV]

Well done.

[Voldemort point two]

Pretty unoriginal. If you write it well it will be fine.

[Falidan]

I must agree that this seems unoriginal. It would make for great practice, but I doubt that it would make it much farther than that. However, I do hope that you can prove me wrong. Maybe if you use this idea as a side plot for a larger story?

[SpencerStrike]

Voldemort point two

Pretty unoriginal. If you write it well it will be fine.

I suppose, but I've had it in my head a while now, I suppose it is reminiscent of The Golden Compass, now I think of it.