but at the same time im afraid to show it to people. i dont know but if you want to read them and help me get better post here and ill PM you the short stories and you can critique them on here as well.
Don't write on Alot! He doesn't like being written on! (I'm joking.)
Yeah, I agree with Icehawk. Finish writing the gosh-dang thing first, edit, then share. If you're having troubles then force the words to come out. You'll get better with time and practice.