LadyvonCrumplebottom
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- Posted: Thu, 13 Mar 2014 21:39:22 +0000
I've been tossing this story idea in my head for the last couple of months. I haven't really started to truly write it because I'm not sure if it would be a good read or not. Indeed, I don't want to pour my heart into something that turns out to be cliched, dull, predictable, etc. So I am here to present to you all a basic outline of what ideas I have for it thus far. Mind you that it's in its infantile stage and I'm sure that there are plenty of kinks to iron out, but I'd just like to know if the overall plot would be something people would want to read! While reading my outline, please keep these things in mind:
1. Are there any cliches? Has the story been done a thousand times before?
2. Are the character's names good, or are they dull?
3. Is there enough drama and conflict to keep readers interested, or is it just predictable nonsense?
1. Are there any cliches? Has the story been done a thousand times before?
2. Are the character's names good, or are they dull?
3. Is there enough drama and conflict to keep readers interested, or is it just predictable nonsense?
The main characters are Serena DeLuca, from whose point of view this is written, and Lex Richards. Serena and Lex met during a high school play in which the two were seniors. Serena worked as part of the props crew whereas Lex was a supporting actor. I have two ideas for how they first meet. A. The two meet when Serena helps a crying child who wants Lex's autograph; B. Serena is ordered to run a prop/wig/something to Lex. Serena is soon invited to attend the cast party by the director, where the two characters get to know each other better. The two lose touch after that evening and go separate ways after graduation.
Five years later, they are seniors in college. I haven't decided on Serena's major (not that it truly matters), but Lex is a major in performing arts and an aspiring actor. They meet once more while on the bus to the campus, where they catch up. This time, they become best friends and grow rather close. During winter break they decide to take a day trip to a city (which one is undecided). They talk about their respective relationships and other personal matters. However, snowy weather conditions prevent them from driving back home so they have to rent a motel room. As far as the motel room scene, I have two ideas: A. They have to share a bed, but nothing happens; B. Lex teaches Serena how to kiss after she reveals that she has never done so.
Serena wakes up the next morning and feels guilty after realizing that she may have possibly cheated on her boyfriend. Over breakfast, Lex consoles her and ensures her that they did nothing wrong, but asks her if she wished that more happened. She does not respond. The two make it home and during a day at college Lex notices Serena sitting under a tree in the courtyard. After some talking, Lex kisses Serena. It turns out that both of them had been thinking of the night at the motel room. From then on, the two take part in a secret friends-with-benefits relationship.
Three more years pass by. Serena works as a file clerk/secretary/something and Lex has reluctantly given up on his dreams of becoming an actor. He settles for a job as a salesman to pay off his student loans. Serena marries her college boyfriend, as does Lex and his old high school sweetheart (some point later on). Serena visits Lex at his apartment the night before her wedding, wearing her gown as she just got back from the ceremony rehearsal. The two eventually make love for the first time.
Parts of the story show how their respective marriages deteriorate, and how Lex and Serena meet up once in a while to escape the chaos. Serena meets Lex's family while visiting his house, revisit the city they once took a road trip to, or perhaps any other ideas I may have. The two eventually have an argument after Lex discovers that Serena had been fooling around with a coworker when she comes late to their meeting spot. She asks why he cares since they're not a couple anyway. He does not respond. Serena's husband eventually learns of the betrayal and promptly files for divorce. I want to make something for Lex's wife, and I have the following ideas: A. She commits suicide; B. She dies of a disease; C. She leaves him; or D. Something else I'm not sure of yet.
Once Lex and Serena's respective marriages fall apart, Lex proposes marriage to Serena. She's hesitant and says that they do not deserve each other nor happiness after all that they have done, but Lex convinces her that it's the right thing to do after all of these years. Serena accepts. On their way to the courthouse, the car swerves in snow and crashes. As Lex is dying from his injuries, Serena writes this story in the hospital, admitting that neither of them truly do not deserve happiness in the end. Not even in the afterlife, she says, will they be together.
Five years later, they are seniors in college. I haven't decided on Serena's major (not that it truly matters), but Lex is a major in performing arts and an aspiring actor. They meet once more while on the bus to the campus, where they catch up. This time, they become best friends and grow rather close. During winter break they decide to take a day trip to a city (which one is undecided). They talk about their respective relationships and other personal matters. However, snowy weather conditions prevent them from driving back home so they have to rent a motel room. As far as the motel room scene, I have two ideas: A. They have to share a bed, but nothing happens; B. Lex teaches Serena how to kiss after she reveals that she has never done so.
Serena wakes up the next morning and feels guilty after realizing that she may have possibly cheated on her boyfriend. Over breakfast, Lex consoles her and ensures her that they did nothing wrong, but asks her if she wished that more happened. She does not respond. The two make it home and during a day at college Lex notices Serena sitting under a tree in the courtyard. After some talking, Lex kisses Serena. It turns out that both of them had been thinking of the night at the motel room. From then on, the two take part in a secret friends-with-benefits relationship.
Three more years pass by. Serena works as a file clerk/secretary/something and Lex has reluctantly given up on his dreams of becoming an actor. He settles for a job as a salesman to pay off his student loans. Serena marries her college boyfriend, as does Lex and his old high school sweetheart (some point later on). Serena visits Lex at his apartment the night before her wedding, wearing her gown as she just got back from the ceremony rehearsal. The two eventually make love for the first time.
Parts of the story show how their respective marriages deteriorate, and how Lex and Serena meet up once in a while to escape the chaos. Serena meets Lex's family while visiting his house, revisit the city they once took a road trip to, or perhaps any other ideas I may have. The two eventually have an argument after Lex discovers that Serena had been fooling around with a coworker when she comes late to their meeting spot. She asks why he cares since they're not a couple anyway. He does not respond. Serena's husband eventually learns of the betrayal and promptly files for divorce. I want to make something for Lex's wife, and I have the following ideas: A. She commits suicide; B. She dies of a disease; C. She leaves him; or D. Something else I'm not sure of yet.
Once Lex and Serena's respective marriages fall apart, Lex proposes marriage to Serena. She's hesitant and says that they do not deserve each other nor happiness after all that they have done, but Lex convinces her that it's the right thing to do after all of these years. Serena accepts. On their way to the courthouse, the car swerves in snow and crashes. As Lex is dying from his injuries, Serena writes this story in the hospital, admitting that neither of them truly do not deserve happiness in the end. Not even in the afterlife, she says, will they be together.