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You might want to proofread that.
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You might want to proofread that.

And add some, you know.. structure.
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You might want to proofread that.

And add some, you know.. structure.

And learn which is the correct spelling of 'steel'.
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I_Write_Ivre
You might want to proofread that.

And add some, you know.. structure.

And learn which is the correct spelling of 'steel'.

Yea..
Nice effort but,
"Emo" or 'heart-ache poetry' maybe?
=/=
Good poetry.
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lol thanks guys but i was typeing this in a hurry so thats why its not proof read to good
xDGiantMidget
lol thanks guys but i was typeing this in a hurry so thats why its not proof read to good


But one of the basic rules of writing is to proofread first.
ill remember that next time

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