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Post: 84538733_1 created on Tue, 05 Feb 2013 04:00:09 +0000
Posted: Tue, 05 Feb 2013 04:00:09 +0000

I am writing a story, and I'm pretty new to writing and would love some critique from good writers. It'd be much appreciated!

Here it is: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=99300

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Post: 84538733_2 created on Tue, 05 Feb 2013 04:12:33 +0000
Posted: Tue, 05 Feb 2013 04:12:33 +0000

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Tis good my Spoon.

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Post: 84538733_3 created on Tue, 05 Feb 2013 04:14:16 +0000
Posted: Tue, 05 Feb 2013 04:14:16 +0000

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY heart heart heart

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Post: 84538733_4 created on Wed, 06 Feb 2013 01:57:15 +0000
Posted: Wed, 06 Feb 2013 01:57:15 +0000

It seems like it could be really good....with a little improvement. Just hit the enter button a couple of times between paragraphs for net-reading.

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Post: 84538733_5 created on Fri, 08 Feb 2013 22:14:34 +0000
Posted: Fri, 08 Feb 2013 22:14:34 +0000

SPOON. Geud jawb, I didn't know you wrote schtuff. c:
*high five

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