WIP Redline requested

[Reject-tcejeR]

Its a gift for my girlfriend and I need a little bit of help. A redline would be nice too.
Please and Thanks for stopping by

[SailorMinty]

Reject-tcejeR

Its a gift for my girlfriend and I need a little bit of help. A redline would be nice too.
Please and Thanks for stopping by

Perhaps try making his shoulders the same length, height and size?
Hope i helped.
Ps. It's sweet that you'd do that for your gf.
Oh, and his bent leg needs to be brought in a bit and his calf needs to be a tad bit smaller than the other.

[Yujioko]

This is a GORGEOUS drawing! It's so serene and makes you feel peaceful just looking at it ; w ;
Your girlfriend is a lucky girl to receive such a beautiful gift :3

I'm definitely not the best but I just pointed out the only small problems I could see. Other then the legs and shoulder area I don't see anything else~
Here

I'm sorry if it's confusing ; - ; I suck at explanations..

[Reject-tcejeR]

Thank you all! <3
This helped a lot