UPDATES!! JUNE 1st What do you think of the composition?

[Sage13]

UPDATES!!!!

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Added the clothes and such. Still needs background. Thanks for all the comments so far

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'd like to get your FB on the composition so far. I've got to add clothes, the design for the wings and the far background but anyway- reply! smile



Pardon the scanning on this one. The piece was HUGE and I had to scan it on a small scanner like 7 times and piece it together in PS sad


thanks!

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[Sword II]

Something about the face looks strange, and her arms looks a bit...manly.

Otherwise, it looks quite good. ^__^

[Godon]

the torso is a bit too short and the hands are a bit too big. you may work on the arms a bit more to make them a bit softer, but thats all up to you.

[Ipecac]

This is a man with boobs. You should make her face and body slightly more feminine in order for people to think she is a woman. Although i like the basis for your feet.

[Dragonaeve]

Ahh...torso too short, belly button too high, legs a little too short...and if you want it muscley, that's quite fine with me. X] Looks pretty nice so far.

[Fantasyrogue]

Very nice. Like the design, the clothes too. I don't mind her being a bit stocky and muscly. Her head however is a bit manly, I think it's mostly the forehead. What size is that sketch anyways, there's so much detail in it and it looks so clean, wow.

[faeriekitsune]

Temp post. I will write later, bell ringing as I type and I wanna make sure I find this again.

Short version Forearms too small for hands, hips kinda......square... sweatdrop , any definition on front foot?

Kk, gotta run to history...

[Eolian]

The background design is really nice, but for the whole sketch, you could adjust the brightness and contract to clean it up a bit.
Over all, a really nice picture heart

[faeriekitsune]

Ok, i'm getting mad. The school computer has eaten my post twice and gaia ate the first one.

Hips = square
Front foot....seems malformed. no toes.
fore arms are too small for the hands.
weight seems to be resting on something, no spot shown except a small spire of rock that would be very uncomfortable.
no bumps or |\|ipples shown or at least sembalance. (shcool computers check for dirty words. sorri for leet.) it keeps bothering me and just wanted to mention it.

[Sage13]

Heh. Ok Thanks. I'll go back and clean those things up a bit!

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