unfinished amateur pic

[protect]

please tell me what you think of it and what i could improve on, i know the body will be one thing and maybe the hair but neway just let me know thx smile

[Stumbliana]

Baaaad, make sure you use a reference, don't try and draw out of your head wink

[TheWhitePhoenix]

Stumbliana

Baaaad, make sure you use a reference, don't try and draw out of your head wink

Well, that's not entirly true. You don't -have- to use a reference for your art to be good, it might help, but...*shrug* Oh, and big tip here. Remember, people are 3-dimensional, try to incorperate that into your drawings.

[protect]

ok kool thank you for the advice and by reference do you mean an actual character or for it to be based on another character? lol sweatdrop

[Stumbliana]

I mean get a pic of an actual person from whatver in that pose, so that you'll know how it's supposed to look.

[protect]

ok smile thank you 3nodding

[woogles]

Needless to say that you need to practice. But I would work on the head and hair more than anything eles since that's what usually pulls the whole picture together. The head shape...there are plenty of good tutorials like polycarbon to help you with that. The hair looks like pieces of yarn from a ragdoll. sweatdrop

I would echo the other's and say that reference material would work wonders. The pose here looks stiff and unnatural, especially the arm and hand.

And finally...the wind is blowing in two different directins in your picture. It might help if your picture abide by the laws of physics. biggrin

[Kira_Demon311]

you should work on the head and hair and also practice, practice helps

[Vanerith]

i agree with the others, hair and head: lots of practice! and also use reference, and the wind IS blowing in two diferent directions..

[Wrythe]

She needs more hair... it looks like she's balding on the left side.

[protect]

thx for ur comments guys u roock! lol sweatdrop

[Mirushi]

You've already heard this, but the wind blows in one direction, not two. And more hair and practise. We all need practise(less or more)! 3nodding

[Endoh_Yumi]

using a refrence is always good, then you can move on to doing your own work and do different poses and such, just remember practice is good. smile