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Critiques and comments would be much appreciated!

I'm not sure if I'll keep it black and white and just clean it up & add some tone, or try my hand at filling it with color (although I'm not very good at that sweatdrop ).
just so it's a little more clear, she's actually got a fork in her hand that has a little piece of cake that she's feeding the phoenix :3
Gods Condom
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Critiques and comments would be much appreciated!

I'm not sure if I'll keep it black and white and just clean it up & add some tone, or try my hand at filling it with color (although I'm not very good at that sweatdrop ).
just so it's a little more clear, she's actually got a fork in her hand that has a little piece of cake that she's feeding the phoenix :3

It looks really well done but could be improved if you wanted to,.
I do think the face seem too straight-foward, and needs a more side view-ish touch to make the person more authentic.
Other than that, a fix up and toning will make this pic really cute~!! whee
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Tipsy Noob

Mikito Seriyko
Gods Condom
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Critiques and comments would be much appreciated!

I'm not sure if I'll keep it black and white and just clean it up & add some tone, or try my hand at filling it with color (although I'm not very good at that sweatdrop ).
just so it's a little more clear, she's actually got a fork in her hand that has a little piece of cake that she's feeding the phoenix :3

It looks really well done but could be improved if you wanted to,.
I do think the face seem too straight-foward, and needs a more side view-ish touch to make the person more authentic.
Other than that, a fix up and toning will make this pic really cute~!! whee


I totally agree. Her face was the last to go in, I got frustrated with it and just slopped it in there. xD Thank you for the comments biggrin
Gods Condom
Mikito Seriyko
Gods Condom
User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.
Critiques and comments would be much appreciated!

I'm not sure if I'll keep it black and white and just clean it up & add some tone, or try my hand at filling it with color (although I'm not very good at that sweatdrop ).
just so it's a little more clear, she's actually got a fork in her hand that has a little piece of cake that she's feeding the phoenix :3

It looks really well done but could be improved if you wanted to,.
I do think the face seem too straight-foward, and needs a more side view-ish touch to make the person more authentic.
Other than that, a fix up and toning will make this pic really cute~!! whee


I totally agree. Her face was the last to go in, I got frustrated with it and just slopped it in there. xD Thank you for the comments biggrin

Your very welcome! 3nodding

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