Snow White Work in Progress Please Critique

[London Rose LaRue]

[London Rose LaRue]

Updated. Still very badly needing critique!

[Weenie Hut Franchise]

What kind of critique are you exactly looking for o: ? Just stuff in general or is there something specific you had in mind?

[DearJayme]

this looks beautiful~! heart great work (sorry can't help with the critique sweatdrop )

[London Rose LaRue]

Retro Zombees

What kind of critique are you exactly looking for o: ? Just stuff in general or is there something specific you had in mind?

All critique is welcome. Anatomy, light source, value, form, etc. Anything that isn't correct or could simply be done in a better way is what I'm looking for critique on. Even just general comments (I like it, I don't like it, etc) are very much appreciated. smile

[London Rose LaRue]

DearJayme

this looks beautiful~! heart great work (sorry can't help with the critique sweatdrop )

Thank you very much. smile

[Weenie Hut Franchise]

London Rose LaRue

Okey dokey!

The light source is kind of confusing to me, especially in the corset. The highlighting and shading don't really match up with each other all the way through the piece (the only places that have the brightest light are her face and breast area - this could be extended to the hand and arm area.) I think first you should find a definite light source, or make it more clear if you already have one.

The arms, more particularly the wrists and hands also need some work. It kind of looks like there's no wrist at all and I'm not sure if it's because of the way you drew the hands or the forearm. Also with the hands, I think the left (our left, her right) hand is too big and the right is too small, but overall they look nice.

I'm really sorry if none of this is helpful for you ;A ; Just figured I'd put my two cents in. I do like it though and I'd like to see it finished!

[Cutsie Mootsie]

You should draw (Real life) me. o U o

[Trance Harper]

This is lovely ! Wonderfully proportioned , enchanting expression .
The only thing I find odd about it is the red in her hair - I can't tell
if it's hair or if it's an accent so it throws things off a little .
Otherwise fantastic ! Love to see more of your work C:

[GrimDaeva]

It's beautiful!

Retro Zombees basically covered everything I wanted to say biggrin

One thing about the light source I'd like to see is a little more balanced light/dark values in her hair.
Also the ribbons are not flowing too well in her hair and need more contrast and slight texture to stand out.

Hope this helps. Let me know if you need more clarification ^ u ^
Overall I'm really liking where its going.

[x_Duckling_x]

What the efdsc fudge . 0.
.... I was scrolling down expecting to see some linear sketchy avi art & I was pleasantly surprised biggrin
I'm pretty sure you will define and co over it, but there isn't anything that stands out to be incorrect to me. c:
..they are red horns on her hair?

[EllieAyla]

I can't. Wauw. ;_; so pretty.