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Post: 6831776_1 created on Sat, 26 Mar 2005 19:36:32 +0000
Posted: Sat, 26 Mar 2005 19:36:32 +0000

Comments? Critique? Please be brutally honest =]

My second commission ever. Still MUCH to finish, but... thoughts?
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This is my most recent sketch...
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I kinda gave up on this one a while ago, but...
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Post: 6831776_2 created on Sat, 26 Mar 2005 20:42:34 +0000
Posted: Sat, 26 Mar 2005 20:42:34 +0000

I like your more recent sketch
the hair looks nice, the ear seems odd and the eyes are okay....

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Post: 6831776_3 created on Sat, 26 Mar 2005 22:57:47 +0000
Posted: Sat, 26 Mar 2005 22:57:47 +0000

Yay, someone replied! xd Thank you for your comment <3

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Post: 6831776_4 created on Sat, 26 Mar 2005 23:20:00 +0000
Posted: Sat, 26 Mar 2005 23:20:00 +0000

kick a** man, you got some skillzzzzz

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Post: 6831776_5 created on Sat, 26 Mar 2005 23:58:04 +0000
Posted: Sat, 26 Mar 2005 23:58:04 +0000

in your first drawing the shoulders slope too much, it looks like she has no shoulders at all. her collar bones are supposed to be roughly horizontal to her shoulder so where the bones point towards the neck her shoulders should start. (i hope that made sense sweatdrop )

other than that its a wonderful drawing. i especially love the detail you put into the eyes 3nodding and her sad expression is so cute!

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Post: 6831776_6 created on Sun, 27 Mar 2005 00:39:20 +0000
Posted: Sun, 27 Mar 2005 00:39:20 +0000

Red_Sion

Thanks. Fixed what you pointed out <3 Well... Tried to at least. =]

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Post: 6831776_7 created on Sun, 27 Mar 2005 01:23:02 +0000
Posted: Sun, 27 Mar 2005 01:23:02 +0000

wow both pictures are great. the second one reminds me of my friends and me. i especially like the design of the necklace in the first one

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Post: 6831776_8 created on Sun, 27 Mar 2005 02:16:08 +0000
Posted: Sun, 27 Mar 2005 02:16:08 +0000

those are really good. i like the eyes especially! heart

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Post: 6831776_9 created on Sun, 27 Mar 2005 03:55:37 +0000
Posted: Sun, 27 Mar 2005 03:55:37 +0000

awww...they're so nice~~~ maybe some shading??

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Post: 6831776_10 created on Sun, 27 Mar 2005 05:12:32 +0000
Posted: Sun, 27 Mar 2005 05:12:32 +0000

Wow! you draw so well... eek

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Post: 6831776_11 created on Sun, 27 Mar 2005 06:14:12 +0000
Posted: Sun, 27 Mar 2005 06:14:12 +0000

Brutally honest? Finish those pictures. ^_^

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Post: 6831776_12 created on Sun, 27 Mar 2005 06:43:03 +0000
Posted: Sun, 27 Mar 2005 06:43:03 +0000

Maybe the shoulders shape in the first one could be improved... The ear is a little too low... But everything's ok for me blaugh ! I like the first drawing more than the second... But both are great ! ! ! 3nodding

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Post: 6831776_13 created on Sun, 27 Mar 2005 18:33:16 +0000
Posted: Sun, 27 Mar 2005 18:33:16 +0000

Thank you for the comments =] <3

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