Sketch- critiques welcome

[halfbisqued]

Just a quick sketch trying a new technique. Let me know what you think, constructive criticism greatly appreciated.
(aside from the feet, i know those are very wierd. XD)

[Athanatos Nivalis]

Nice Sketch surprised
But I think the Neck's too Long
And the Hands' a bit weird

[Kendrirck]

biggrin Very nice. But the neck seems a bit long, the hands seem wonky, and the legs just appear too short to me. Maybe a tad bit longer, perhaps?