Rion

[Galerian Rion]

This is a sketch of Rion from Galerians: Ash. can you give me some tips on anything i need to improve?



Ok here is one that is more clearer.

[Galerian Rion]

sorry if the lines are kinda blurry my scanner scans them in really big so when i make them smaller it messes up the lines.

[Sekmeth Bastet]

His legs are really long (unless you meant to do it this way...)
But that is nice!

[Mercae Killar]

not too bad, ive never heard of or seen the inspiration for this so i dont know the style, but the head seems way too tiny and the legs too long.

[Galerian Rion]

hmm yea I always have problems with the head...hmm let me try and fix it.