Please comment on this quick sketch...

This sketch...

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[A e k i r i]

Ive just started it, and It still needs work but plz comment I would love to hear any and all comments or suggestions your willing to make. Thanks 3nodding


<img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v151/snstarrynights/rpcharacter.jpg">

Ps...this image has been resized smaller. sry if its harder to see or fuzzy at all.

[Death.Death.Death.]

align the ears, lengthen the legs, add bottoms/laces to shoes, make left forearm less skinny, add random pockets/folds.... that's all for now smile

[A e k i r i]

Death.Death.Death.

align the ears, lengthen the legs, add bottoms/laces to shoes, make left forearm less skinny, add random pockets/folds.... that's all for now smile

Yah youre right i think the legs are just a lil short cuz I resized it by hand. Laces are a great Idea it does need more detail in her shoes thanks for your comment. wink

[animebratt]

Well, she isn't standing straight, or is that how you wanted it? She is sorta tilted on the paper, and her buns need to be a little bit more aligned

[itsdarkinhere]

i think its cute. i can see what u r talking about . but besides that its good.

[A e k i r i]

k, i changed the pants, shirt, arm length, leg length, and I will be posting a new copy soon. 3nodding this ones much much better....nvm ill just post the finished copy...

[Chobits my obsession]

nice smile i like it heart biggrin

[A e k i r i]

<img src="http://img233.echo.cx/img233/3562/girl0os.jpg">

slightly changed version, will b resized later and i will fix the lines so that they are smooth on adobe, I will also darken them on adobe.

[KpCloudM]

I'm impressed.
Keep it up!

[A e k i r i]

thanks for all the comments Today I am going to begin adding the color (o; Yah. I might take me a while, sweatdrop but I will post it here, so everyone who comented can see the results 3nodding

[A e k i r i]

<img src="http://img252.echo.cx/img252/4245/kit3zx.jpg">

sry no background, cant make a good one anyways...so I guess it doesnt matter, plz dont comment too harshly on this cuz its my finished product and it would be hard (not imposible) for me to go back and fix mistakes. Enjoy. xp

[tooaya]

Weight balance is a bit inclined so she looks like she's gonna fall or something. Maybe set something beside her?

[charsiewpau]

It looks good.. and it seems she's staring at something in the distance.

You could try making the shiny in her eyes in different positions (eg.. a bit more to the center) to make her stare at the at the viewer instead.

But I'd suggest for you to try them in other positions and observe the effect.

It's not a rule set in stone though.. so just keep trying and have fun!

but as toaya says, she's a bit tilted.. (I used to make this mistake, sometimes I still do.. LOL)

If you'd like to make it look normal you can add a wall (like she's leaning)

or a lamp post? (something, up to you..)


Well! Keep at it!