Marceline: Critique/redline?

[lishi-chan]

I've been working on this picture of Marceline from Adventure time today, and I reallyyyy like it so I thought I should get some suggestions to see if there's anything I should fix up before I move into the coloring step!

I did end up fixing the size of the far foot after uploading this. I made it smaller, I just don't wanna upload it again just for the foot so just ignore that little goof.

But anyways, is there anything that you guys see that I need to fix up? Or maybe any of you out there that could do a redline for me maybe? I just wanna try to get it as good as I can before I go to the point of no return with it. c:

[lishi-chan]

Please~? c:
I've got a couple days until class and I can use CS6 so at least I'm not in too much of a rush. >w<

[Corrupter of Words]

Keep in mind that even skin tight clothing has wrinkles and folds in it, the legs are looking flat.

[lishi-chan]

Corrupter of Words

Ack, I always end up doing that with the upper part of pants. D:
Okay, I'll see what I can do to get some folds in. Thank you much for the input hun.

[Corrupter of Words]

No problem. I think you have a lot of potential

[lishi-chan]

Thank you very much. ;w;

Is there anything else that anyone sees? I started some projects so I have more time than I thought before I can color so I'd love if anyone saw anything else that was off, they'd let me know. ♥

[lishi-chan]

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