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Post: 2516430_1 created on Mon, 07 Jun 2004 08:47:39 +0000
Posted: Mon, 07 Jun 2004 08:47:39 +0000

Rough draft

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Post: 2516430_2 created on Mon, 07 Jun 2004 08:50:09 +0000
Posted: Mon, 07 Jun 2004 08:50:09 +0000

some finished touch but still working on

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Post: 2516430_3 created on Mon, 07 Jun 2004 13:38:45 +0000
Posted: Mon, 07 Jun 2004 13:38:45 +0000

WOW! Nice pictures!! You're doing really well, I don't really have anything to say. This is up to you, but it looks like you're trying to make it look like there's wind, and you've done a great job on that for the cape and the hair, but the hair in the front look really still. Great job though!

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Post: 2516430_4 created on Mon, 07 Jun 2004 16:59:41 +0000
Posted: Mon, 07 Jun 2004 16:59:41 +0000

It looks real nice...you can see the wind blowing in her hair..

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Post: 2516430_5 created on Wed, 16 Jun 2004 09:55:26 +0000
Posted: Wed, 16 Jun 2004 09:55:26 +0000

The hands are a bit small.

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Post: 2516430_6 created on Wed, 16 Jun 2004 20:40:05 +0000
Posted: Wed, 16 Jun 2004 20:40:05 +0000

3nodding That's pretty good! Although I may like to suggest one thing I think...hmmm...I was looking at the hands and they seemed a little small...maybe bring out the hands more...I dunno...^^; but other than that YAY! biggrin

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Post: 2516430_7 created on Wed, 16 Jun 2004 20:51:07 +0000
Posted: Wed, 16 Jun 2004 20:51:07 +0000

eek I love it! Its beatiful! biggrin

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Post: 2516430_8 created on Thu, 17 Jun 2004 06:19:06 +0000
Posted: Thu, 17 Jun 2004 06:19:06 +0000

Oooo, great sketch! I like the swirliness. ^_^

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Post: 2516430_9 created on Thu, 17 Jun 2004 07:03:11 +0000
Posted: Thu, 17 Jun 2004 07:03:11 +0000

eek Wow thats really good... crying I wish I could draw like that... Only thing I see you have to do is make the hands bigger... Other than that, it's great! xd

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Post: 2516430_10 created on Thu, 17 Jun 2004 07:25:08 +0000
Posted: Thu, 17 Jun 2004 07:25:08 +0000

I love the detail you put into the eyes and the hair. Her hands are a tad small, though.. a good way to judge the sive of them is to take your own hand to your own face, and note the relationships in size. Then base the size of the hands in the picture off of the same idea.

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Post: 2516430_11 created on Thu, 17 Jun 2004 19:25:24 +0000
Posted: Thu, 17 Jun 2004 19:25:24 +0000

I especially love the hair, so pretty. But the left arm needs some work, the left hand is too small. The legs look somewhat weird and unnatural... Good luck with the revision, I'd love to see it colored. heart

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Post: 2516430_12 created on Sun, 20 Jun 2004 17:29:13 +0000
Posted: Sun, 20 Jun 2004 17:29:13 +0000

HarunoHana

eek Wow thats really good... crying I wish I could draw like that... Only thing I see you have to do is make the hands bigger... Other than that, it's great! xd

Well said. I actually agree with that completely wink