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This is someone's avatar art...
A little messed up in the hair, but this is just a rough sketch, so it's okay:  Comments? Concerns? Critiques? Tips? All are welcomed. RavenParadox |
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Gosh, it's quite nice. Very light.
The only thing I'm confused about is... What happened to the hand that's behind the staff? Ehh. And if you please, come see my WIP here. Just a request, you don't have to :} |
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Her eyes are a wee bit far apart and rather large for the size of the face in general. But that could be stylized preference... though I think bringing the eyes closer together will make the whole thing more pleasing to the viewer.
Also, as mentioned above me, the hand behind the staff seems deformed. The hand before the staff is amazing though! <3 And a wee thing to note.. I think her right shoulder is wider than her left shoulder is. Just a teeny bit though. Overall I love this picture. It's very pretty. The scribblyness of it appeals to me at this stage of construction and coloring. |
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"U-ne33k" Gosh, it's quite nice. Very light. The only thing I'm confused about is... What happened to the hand that's behind the staff? Ehh. And if you please, come see my WIP here. Just a request, you don't have to :} It's a rough sketch XD. I'm usually not so detailed with hands and stuffs. But yeah, it look a little dead to the world. I'll fix it. It's light cuz I lowered the opacity. I don't want to put up a full unfinished picture up. For obvious reasons. A lot of people on Gaia steal art. |
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"Oni to Sakura" Her eyes are a wee bit far apart and rather large for the size of the face in general. But that could be stylized preference... though I think bringing the eyes closer together will make the whole thing more pleasing to the viewer. Also, as mentioned above me, the hand behind the staff seems deformed. The hand before the staff is amazing though! <3 And a wee thing to note.. I think her right shoulder is wider than her left shoulder is. Just a teeny bit though. Overall I love this picture. It's very pretty. The scribblyness of it appeals to me at this stage of construction and coloring. Oh yes, yes, her eyes are o_<. Anyway, it's just the rough sketch so I'm not going to go crazy about it XD. And thanks for pointing out the think with the shoulder. Would've never seen that before. About the scribblyness: To be honest with you, I sort of like my art sketched more than I like it finalized :X. It's more raw and gritty XD. And, I don't know, more man made, I guess...So I feel the same way that you do XD. |
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god, its really good, i like the colors but her right eye is meant to look like that?
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Very nice!
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"U-ne33k" Gosh, it's quite nice. Very light. The only thing I'm confused about is... What happened to the hand that's behind the staff? Ehh. And if you please, come see my WIP here. Just a request, you don't have to :} Indeed! It's like the person gave up at that point. lol I'll go look U-ne33k if you go look at mine and help! D: |
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"Belladona Nightshade" "U-ne33k" Gosh, it's quite nice. Very light. The only thing I'm confused about is... What happened to the hand that's behind the staff? Ehh. And if you please, come see my WIP here. Just a request, you don't have to :} Indeed! It's like the person gave up at that point. lol I'll go look U-ne33k if you go look at mine and help! D: Thus this being a ROUGH SKETCH. |
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? Well... I mean, it doesn't change that fact. People put up WIPs for crit.
Otherwise, they'd just put up finished products in the Picture Post forum. confused Everything in this forum is incomplete. In a way, pointing out the flaws or whatever they have questions on is what helps finish the picture for the artist. Actually... what did you need help on? Can you still make adjustments? This place is for unfinished stuff. ^_^ (Don't take this the wrong way, I mean, maybe what you need is in the regular picture post forum. Just trying to help. ) |
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"Belladona Nightshade" ? Well... I mean, it doesn't change that fact. People put up WIPs for crit. Otherwise, they'd just put up finished products in the Picture Post forum. confused Everything in this forum is incomplete. In a way, pointing out the flaws or whatever they have questions on is what helps finish the picture for the artist. Actually... what did you need help on? Can you still make adjustments? This place is for unfinished stuff. ^_^ (Don't take this the wrong way, I mean, maybe what you need is in the regular picture post forum. Just trying to help. ) No, no, you said that it was like I gave up at a certain point XD. So I was reminding you that it's a rough sketch. If you'd said something like, "Maybe she can't draw hands well," I would have understood. But to suggest that I gave up after a certain point :/...It sounds a bit accusatory. And you didn't even critique it XD. |
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